I’ll list them here: That is an astonishing 76 words that you could use in ANY essay, or 26% of the total 292 words in this essay. How many other interesting ideas adn examples could you give if you had another 76 or 80 words available?
You’ve , unlike writers in many other essays on this site, so well done for remembering them and inserting them correctly. Have a look at the official IELTS descriptors for Task 2 Writing here.
Secretly recording videos of teachers or other students is another concern.
These videos are often embarrassing and may even be the cause for educators to lose their job or dignity.
Likewise, we can also text messages with beautiful photos or even high-quality video clips to share the exciting moment of our life.
Apart from that, a mobile phone has also become important entertainment equipment.
By mobile, users can enjoy video games, listen to the music or even watch a movie smoothly.
To conclude, it is inarguable that mobile phones are not perfect so far, but they can produce more valuable and beneficial influences.
This fast connectivity has its advantages and disadvantages, and there’s a fine line between them when it comes to young people.
They are still in school and parents and teachers are asking the same question: should cell phones be allowed in school?