Feaver uses a first-person pronoun in a similar way to Flynn in “The Gun”, but to quite a different effect.She writes “I join in the cooking”, using the ideas of “joining in” – implying cooperation – and “cooking”, which is often regarded as a social activity, to create a sense of community.Poetry analysis, also sometimes referred to as a poetry review, is a reflection on a poem that involves analyzing the poetic instruments, discussing the language and the figures used by the author, as well as sharing one’s personal position on the poem.
Phonological techniques are also used by the poet to create an impression of excitement; she writes “You trample fur and feathers.
There’s a spring in your step…”, thus using repeated voiceless fricatives to convey the feeling of an excited rush.
“The poet uses many linguistic techniques.” That’s too vague even for an introduction, but giving examples of literary techniques and stating what effect they have in a few words will do the trick.
You could structure your introduction by summarising the similarities and then differences between each poem, as below: In some senses, the two poems portray a similar attitude towards violence; in both, there is a certain degree of fascination by death and violence, as well as personal engagement with violence by the narrator.
This paragraph focuses more on grammar, although there is some discussion of word choice too.
I begin by mentioning how the poems are similar but also different, which I do quite often because it adds some nice AO4 nuance.
However, the permanence of violence, death and their effects is a point of disagreement between the two poets, as is the extent to which violent acts can paradoxically ‘give life.’ Once you’ve identified a similarity or a contrast between the poems in terms of language use, explain in detail how that different use of rhyme, structure etc.
contributes to the similar or different way in which the poets convey the theme in the title.
Here are examples of a similarity and a contrast point (try to include fairly equal numbers of each, although arguing that there are more similarities or more contrasts is fine): “The Gun”, Feaver tells an almost joyful story of the experience of hunting, using the simile “your eyes gleam like when sex was fresh”, which draws a link between sexual pleasure and the pleasure of the violence involved in hunting.
The words “gleam” and “fresh” both have the connotations of something new, of positive excitement, implying that carrying out a violent act involves a certain thrill and even a degree of happiness.